Helping Words

The response when I got my paper back from my peer he said it was really good. The story was flowing right from the start. He said it had an ending where you just can't put the paper down. The only thing that he said would be good to change is the ending. It was a dramatic ending that ended fast with not much wrap up. I was supprised with how much the story was liked. I did change the ending to give the story more closure but kept the ending the same.