Monday, April 23, 2007
going shopping
sharing minute
my new phone
next semester
no computers in ugl
The websites!
My nieghborhood sucks!!!
Favorite Song
Dialog
You Don't always die from tobacco video
Easter Break?
Group Design Plan
Audience: Anyone that is capable of being abused in a relationship. People that are seeking out help that have been in abusive relationships or are currently in an abusive relationship.
Organization: WebsiteHome Page 1 Defining and introducing the issue of domestic violence.
Early Signs Page 2List of the signs of domestic violence.
Fighting Back Page 3 The steps to take to fight back. What you can do to get away from domestic violence and start a new life.
Testimonies Page 4Stories of families and people who have dealt with abuse in a relationship.
Links Page 5 Provide links and additional help for the indented audience.
Sunday, April 22, 2007
"Winning is'nt everything, it's everything"
Support 1: People will be failures.
Support 2: There will be nothing to make people want to be succesful.
Support 3: Everyone will be lazy and have no drive to do anything.
Conclusion: Winning is a great thing that is needed by all.
Luck is when Opportunity meets preperation
Support 1: People just works hard and really don't realize how hard they work. And when the work pays off they think that its luck.
Support 2: Some people just have good odds on having success.
Support 3: Luck is not a real thing it's how much a person works and get succesul from it.
Conclusion: When someone get success they call it luck.
Annoying Friend and Classmate
Support 1: Not fair that I have to do all the work and you get credit for my work.
Support 2: I will beat you up if you don't work like the rest of us.
Support 3: I will tell the teacher.
Conclusion: If you don't help with the work you will make me very angry and upset. It's not right that you do nothing and I do all the work.
Lengthening the School Day
Support 1: Have a longer summer vacation.
Support 2: More time to figure out what they want to go to school for.
Support 3: They would have less time to get into trouble during the school year.
Conclusion: A longer school day will be better for students rather than a short one.
School Uniforms
Support 1: Kids can't express themselves.
Support 2: They want learn about how different cultures dress.
Support 3: They will not be able to learn about themselves.
Conclusion: All in all school uniforms are not good because it prevents kids from learning who they are.
Media Violence has a Negative Effect
Thesis: The effects of violence cause's society in many negative ways that makes all people change.
Support 1: Kids act different.
Support 2: More people are hurt and violent.
Support 3: There is less people that can be trusted.
Conclusion: When we use violence as entertainment more younger people use violence as an alternate to get through there problems.
Tattoo
Spring Break Disaster!!
300
workworkwork
World Champions
Skoal, a pinch better ;)
High School vs. University
Family Business
Running Count At The Border
AIM or MSN? that is the question
TPT?
Blogging is Difficult!!
Healthy Lifestyle?
Canadian Students at Wayne State
What it means to be 19 in Canada.
Saturday, April 21, 2007
CAMPFIRE
CAMPFIRE
finals
myspace
finals? HA. Ive got bigger things to worry about.
I've been practicing Weber's Concerto For Bassoon and Orchestra in F major for the past 6 weeks. Come a week from Monday, i will get to walk in by myself and play it in front of the Principle wind players of the Detroit Symphony Orchestra. In an empty auditorium. Talk about a stressful environment.
I love the piece, but im not looking forward to playing it infront of them. Too much is riding on it. Say...my entire scholarship for example.
http://fagotizm.karsav.com/sheet_music/weber.pdf
This is the sheet music for it, with piano accompaniment. I come in at measure 38 and play the top line.
http://www.thehaxor.net/images/01-von%20Weber,%20Bassoon%20Concerto%20in%20F,%201%20Allegro%20ma%20non%20troppo.mp3
This is a recording. It's not me, but i hope to sound something like that.
Concert!
I cant speak for the chorale, but the Wayne State Symphony Orchestra will be playing Haydn's 104th symphony, the "London". It's no Shostakovitch, but its pretty good. I encourage you all to go.
300
Thursday, April 19, 2007
Need more MONEY!!!!!
TIME
what is wrong with young people
young people have GOT to get more active in political issues, whether it be environmental protection, protecting civil rights and liberites, or whatever. find an issue that you like, and do something about it.
i'm getting tired of being the only young person that has an interest in what goes on in the world. we need to get less occupied by American Idol, Britney Spears, or Anna Nicole Smith, and more occupied with troop deployment, environmental pollution and government corruption. in the end, which of those issues affects us more?
Wednesday, April 18, 2007
Parking
I AM SSSSSSOOOOOOOOO TIRED!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My music
So it's the end of class
Now What?
Tuesday, April 17, 2007
finally!
Campus And religion
Lengthening the school day
School Uniforms
Sunday, April 15, 2007
wow!
Friday, April 13, 2007
Holidays!
Thursday, April 12, 2007
My Car
Wednesday, April 11, 2007
Phantom of TheOpera
Short Story!!
Tuesday, April 10, 2007
Our design plan!
Purpose: To make people aware of the different faces of domestic violence. Also to provide help and support to those in need.
Audience: Anyone that is capable of being abused in a relationship. People that are seeking out help that have been in abusive relationships or are currently in an abusive relationship.
Organization:
Website
Home Page 1
Defining and introducing the issue of domestic violence.
Early Signs Page 2
List of the signs of domestic violence.
Fighting Back Page 3
The steps to take to fight back. What you can do to get away from domestic violence and start a new life.
Testimonies Page 4
Stories of families and people who have dealt with abuse in a relationship.
Links Page 5
Provide links and additional help for the indented audience.
Monday, April 09, 2007
The Song
Should school let out on major Christian Holidays?
Design Plan: Group Project
Statement of Purpose: Our group is trying to provide and prove that George Bush is a terrible president.
Overall Strategies: Our strategy is to search various Internet sources, news articles, and magazine clips that has facts about George Bush and his flaws.
Medium: Our medium will be a web page that will have all the information that we need to that Bush is a bad president.
Arrangement: There will be one page that will have links to more web pages that will help explain all the bad decisions that Bush made.
- Introduction
- A menu
- Our names
- Different links that will have different opinions, facts, jokes, and what people think of Bush.
Communication: We will use this web page to post facts on George Bush and tell everyone that he is not a good leader for this country. It will be funny and entertaining for all people who will visit but it will also present factual information.
Test: We will test this project by the response from our classmates.
BBBOOOORED WHAT
but i still cant wait for class to enddddd.
(i wonder if this counts as a blog post)
Friday, April 06, 2007
BLLLOOOGGGGG
so who's all excited that class ends in 3 weeks?
I KNOW YOU ARE!!!
Monday, April 02, 2007
My Favorite Song
Sunday, April 01, 2007
My favorite song
The Old Days
Favorite Song
So anyways, just about every song represents something in my life. those were just a few, i really could go on all day.
Saturday, March 31, 2007
Group Projects
Memories!
http://youtube.com/watch?v=BV5Lc7G928I
Argumentative Essay
FAFSA
Friday, March 30, 2007
NEED A BETTER JOB!!!!!!
CAN'T WAIT TILL THE SUMMER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
One of those Mornings!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RlzvqyBhpdE
Thursday, March 29, 2007
Is it HIS Tomb?
Wednesday, March 28, 2007
An enjoyable weekend
Favorite Song
Songs
A second great song that comes to mind is In The Sky by TI. It brings back memorys of my gandparents and uncle that have died. Its considered a rap song, but it doesnt swear and is nothing like any rap today that you may hear.
Tuesday, March 27, 2007
House (My Critical Anaylsis)
Monday, March 26, 2007
another pointless blog
i just read someones essay because i didnt have mine done, and i relize i do the same thing. his essay was about how dangerous it is to talk on a cell phone and dtive, and text message to. i know it is dangerous and i know it is wrong but im a teen im prone to make mistakes. but im tryin to be a little more safe like useing a bluetooth and not reply to messages anymore. i do however agree with that persons topic, because many accidents do happen because of poeple taking there eyes off the road.
DO NOT WATCH THIS MOVIE
Thursday, March 22, 2007
Critical Analysis
The conclusion was correct I feel because I see some of the things that she talks about everyday. I agree with the author because she first hand went through some of the situations and I have went through some of the same situations. i dissagree with her because she sometimes made light of some of the situations, when knowingly, her opinion was wrong. The strengths of the text was that she actually went through the situations so she knows frist hand. Some of the weaknesses were that she sometimes overexagerated the situations and down played some also. Overall the book was great.
Wednesday, March 21, 2007
Kalahari Waterpark Resorts
I had fun staying by the pool. If anyone is interested in visiting this resort, visit there website at www.kalahariresorts.com.
Wow!
impounded car
Tuesday, March 20, 2007
Supernatural
Friday, March 16, 2007
Freedom Writers
Friday, March 09, 2007
The Topic for my my Dialogue
Tuesday, March 06, 2007
Short Story Topic
Monday, March 05, 2007
C.R.E.A.M
Spring break
over the week
three blogs behind
Sunday, March 04, 2007
Ann Coulter
Thursday, March 01, 2007
SSSSOOOOOOO LATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tuesday, February 27, 2007
One Life to Live
Tuesday, February 20, 2007
American Idol
Monday, February 19, 2007
Dialogue topic
Grammy's
My five questions
No not really. Me being the only child in my mom's house encouraged me to read.
2) Would you say that most people today have access to technology?
Yes
3) What do you think a good writer is?
Someone who can get their point across for someone to understand.
4) What would you do to help someone who doesn't know how to use a computer learn how to use them?
Start with what they do know and go from there.
5) Do you know any other languages? How did You learn them?
Very little Spanish, French, and Arabic. I learned it in my schools.
Dialogue Topic
I'm lost part.2
Helping Words
Sunday, February 18, 2007
bloggin it up
Saturday, February 17, 2007
Dialog Topic
Friday, February 16, 2007
I'm Losing It!!
Clueless In Science
Platos What?
Dialogue
M: I've just finished eating and I want a joint. T do you want to smoke?
T: I dont care. (T is easily influenced by his peers)
B: If you all are about to smoke, I'm leaving because Smoking is bad for you and i'm not going to be apart of this.
M: No one asked you. I asked T if he wanted to smoke. Take your square self away from here talking about smoking is bad. It helps me take a load of stress off from my everyday life. God put this weed on earth for us to smoke. I mean you can't eat it, chew it, cook with it, all you can do is grow it and smoke it. I mean think about it.
T: Like I said it doesnt matter. If you want me to smoke with you I will.
B:T, you need to not be so easily influenced. Just because someone askes you to smoke, you do it. Be your own person. I'm leaving.
M: So you gone smoke or not?
T: No
M: I will smoke by myself
Thursday, February 15, 2007
My Dialogue Topic
I choose this topic because I believe that I can make it interesting and enertaining. I'm not sure if anyone has choosen the same topic as me. I believe that I can make my topic very ineresting to my audience. It will have violence, drama, and action. I really haven't figured out how many sides there are to this topic, but there is more than 2.
It's Been Four Years
I have to say, I would have posted this yesterday, but the snow made problems for my Internet connection. Anyways, I just wanted to thank Jill for giving me the best Valentine's Day gift anyone could ask for... 3 extra hours of sleep.
Domestic Violence
Wednesday, February 14, 2007
My Class
woohoo!
Anyway guys, you need to post two blogs this week. One is from last week: a short dialogue based upon a picture in your text or on the text's website, and the second has to do with your topic and how you plan to develop it into a dialogue, or whether you think you can. That should lead right into making your design plan, so it's not a waste of your time particularly if you're having trouble getting started.
Sunday, February 11, 2007
no!
http://youtube.com/watch?v=RsJxaahWm5U
Friday, February 09, 2007
Reading Comments
Tuesday, February 06, 2007
Strawberries and Papayas
Monday, February 05, 2007
Greatest movie
Another great movie is Attack the Gas Station, a South Korean comedy/drama. It involves 4 misfits who choose to rob a gas station one night. Whist doing the evil deed, a customer drives up. Since they didn't want to arouse suspicion, they service the guy. when the man leaves a tip, they get the bright idea of working the gas station for the night. The events that follow are some of the most ridiculous things. How ridiculous? The ending scene involves a giant street fight between the robbers, police, Chinese Food delivery boys, and High School punks. Truly priceless!!
Favorite movie
Sunday, February 04, 2007
THE GREATEST MOVIE OF ALL TIME
*A wave of kidnappings has swept through Mexico, feeding a growing sense of panic among its wealthier citizens, especially parents. In one six-day period, there were twenty-four abductions, leading many to hire bodyguards for their children. Into this world enters John Creasy, a burned-out ex-CIA operative/assassin, who has given up on life. Creasy's friend Rayburn brings him to Mexico City to be a bodyguard to nine-year-old Pita Ramos, daughter of industrialist Samuel Ramos and his wife Lisa. Creasy is not interested in being a bodyguard, especially to a youngster, but for lack of something better to do, he accepts the assignment. Creasy barely tolerates the precocious child and her pestering questions about him and his life. But slowly, she chips away at his seemingly impenetrable exterior, his defenses drop, and he opens up to her. Creasy's new-found purpose in life is shattered when Pita is kidnapped. Despite being seriously wounded during the kidnapping, he vows to kill anyone involved in or profiting from the kidnapping. And no one can stop him.*
HAPPINESS FOR EVERYBODY, FREE, AND NO ONE WILL GO AWAY UNSATISFIED!
You can find a publically available translation in .txt format here:
http://moshkow.perm.ru/koi/STRUGACKIE/engl_picnic.txt
Saturday, February 03, 2007
Fight Club

Thursday, February 01, 2007
My Cold
Identity
Wednesday, January 31, 2007
A crazy story
Jason & Kyra
Guessing Game
Words
Favorite Story
A Different Way To Communicate
Design Plans
My Favorite Movie
That 70's Show

Free Association
My First Book
Favorite Story
TCA
i personally believe that nowadays everyone should know how to operate a computer and get on the internet becuase it is all around you so u might as well join the new trend,,,
2.what do you think keeps some people from learning computer?
to me i truly believe because people are afraid of them, now my parents r not that high tech so they dont believe it when i tell them they can talk and see there family memebers from back home...
3.what do you think a good writer is?
i think that a good writer is someone who can write a paper clearly and doesnt have to stop and think about what his writing about. so basically everything im not,
4. if anyone in yout family considers themselves to be a bad writer, why do you think that is?
well lets just go to the last question, but i think that im the bad writer because i honestly im not in to it, my favorite subject is math and i guess everyone has there thing.
5.who has been the main source of tech in your life?
well he was my high school teacher and he was the one that tought me everything i know now about computers and how to fix them, the only thing is that im not going to pursue my dream of be a computer engineer... changed to pre-pharm
Monday, January 29, 2007
Dodge the Lodge
Friday, January 26, 2007
Advertising!!
After watching this commercial and in fact most of the commercials that are played today you can tell there are mainly pathos driven. They are effective because they latch on to your emotions, in this case laughter. Even though identity theft is not a funny thing at all this commercial is telling you the fact that identity theft does indeed occur but though citi bank you can lessen the likelihood. I also believe this commercial is demonstrating the ethos part of rhetoric since the speaker has a different identity than expected, the speaker also appears to be an honest man that has had his money stolen.
Advertisement: Rhetorical Analysis and Audience Analysis
Looking at this same advertisement, we can make general ideas as to whom the audience is intended to be. Because it appeals greatly on the idea of a good looking young lady, and an attractive young guy, it can be assumed that the target audience for this particular cookie is young people under the age of 25. This communicates very well to this audience because it appeals to their emotions (pathos) to sell the product.
Thursday, January 25, 2007
An advertisement
Downloadable high quality version available: here (please do not spread this link around)
This advertisement if obviously for the male populace. Most video game players are male. Also, as you can tell the character in the advertisement is an incredibly..."built" individual with a gritty look, and tough bulky armor and a huge gun. It appears to be aimed primarily at owners or prospective owners of xbox 360s. Also, in a rather dramatic way, the normal sound and ambiance has been cut out, and replaced by the song "mad world" played by Gary Jules, originally by the band Tears for Fears. Also, there seems to be a secondary audience of people that heard the song and liked it. If one of your favorite song was used to promote a piece of media, you would be more likely to pick up said piece of media.
T.C.A Entry
Yes my loving grandma, and mother encouraged me to read when I was younger.
2.How do you use technology to communicate today? I use cell phones to communicate in today's life.
3. Do you use the internet? What do you use the internet for? Yes I do use the internet. I use the internet for shopping and information.
4.Do you plan on letting your children use computers? Why or why not? What will you let them do, If you do? I plan on letting my children use computers, because it's important to learn how to use a computer. I will let them type and play games.
5. Do you think that computers ultimately benefit or hurt society? In my opinion computers ultimately benefits the society.
TCA!
What do you think keeps some people from learning computers?
Themselves. Thanks to Hollywood, alot of people are stuck in the paradigm that computers are these magical complex objects that are out to get them. If people actually went at them with an open mind, they'd find out they are much simpler then they had ever imagined.
Do you think that computers ultimately benefit or hurt society?
Neither. The people who would use computers to do bad things to others would just find another way to do bad things to those people. People who commit identity theft online would probably just break into peoples houses instead if computers were not around. I have the same opinion on gun control. It wouldn't reduce violence at all, people would just use other weapons such as knives, or blunt objects. People these days are too keen to cure the symptoms, but not the root of the problem.
Do you play games on computers or video game systems? Which? Why do you like/not like them?
I play both computer games and 360 games. I like computer games more because they usually offer more depth. However, my 360 sees more time with friends because it is much easier to set up a multiplayer game in the living room with four people and four controllers than it is to set up a LAN party. I like video games because it gives me an opportunity to do things that are not possible for me in real life.
Why do you think some people believe the internet is going to destroy today’s “youth”?
Because it is. Never before have people been able to gain access to pornography, drug paraphanelia, stolen goods, commit identity theft, mail fraud, or other such things, all within five minutes of each other, and without leaving their bedroom to boot. Myself, I am not proud of this, but I no longer have any concept of value for music or movies. This is all thanks to the internet.
That sort of technology have the various schools you attended have?
Isbester had some sort of old apple iis, I think. I cant really remember that far back. My middle school had some random crappy network of emacs off a shared 64k ISDN line. You can imagine 32 people in “computer class” (or atleast they called it that. I learned nothing from those classes.) trying to surf the web off a shared connection barely faster then 56k. My highschool had deepfreeze’d workstations connected to a windows 2k3 based network. Im not really sure what kind of internet they had, but it topped out at around 50mbits. They also had poor security. The domain controller’s password was only 4 characters long and only numbers.